Podcast – An Oxford Adventure and Literacy Lesson

In the past, when I have worked with middle and high school students on writing, I have noticed that many of them write in the same manner that they speak. My intention for my podcast was to draw attention to the extra words that we use when talking that are not necessary in a piece of writing. In order to make this aural distinction, I told a story with my friend and occasionally interrupted the action to rephrase sentences that we had said.

I wanted the final product to be a mix of a literacy lesson and an excerpt from the radio show This American Life. However, once I embarked on this task I realized that I definitely am no Ira Glass and need to word on my sound editing skills. I think that the content and length of the story may have overpowered the conveyance of the literacy skills. Although this particular podcast may not adequately serve classroom needs, I think that grabbing the student’s attention with an entertaining podcast would be a quick and effective way of introducing a lesson.

An Oxford Adventure and Literacy Lesson

Cornmarket St, Oxford - where the story takes place.

 

Update: Amanda and Isabella

It’s Isabella here and today Amanda and I have been trying to organize our project so that we know what our next step is. I have now decided that I would like my project to be a slideshow where we will be showing videos and pictures of rowing. Our main pictures and videos will be from the U.S Women’s Rowing Team, Poughkeepsie High School Rowing, and the Vassar College Regatta.  We also came up with interview questions that I will be asking my coaches and other rowers. We also found a hilarious video of a rowing boat flipping, which many rowers will say is their least favorite part of rowing because of the icy cold water.

I am looking forward to finishing my interviews with my coaches and teammates so their voices, in addition to my own, will be heard throughout this project. We will be back in two weeks, hopefully with some sample interviews.

Food for thought: “Not everybody wins, and certainly not everybody wins all the time. But once you get into your boat and push off, tie into your shoes and bootstretchers, then “lean on the oars,” you have indeed won far more than those who have never tried.” – Anonymous

Update: Evil Bunny Project

In our most recent meeting, Karen and Amanda, whose respective partners were out for the day, teamed up together to create a temporary partnership. After some rapid bonding over a math worksheet, we got to work on Karen’s project. Because Karen and Michelle had a well formulated plan from the previous session, we were able to pick up right where they left off and round of the story of the Evil Velveteen Rabbit. Before diving headfirst into the writing of the story, we created story arc and Karen determined her story’s, rising actions, climax, and falling actions; we used the original Velveteen Rabbit as a jumping off point. Karen found an online of the version to remind us of the details of the story. Here is the link we used:

http://digital.library.upenn.edu/women/williams/rabbit/rabbit.html

After we mapped out the story, Karen began writing and we talked about the importance of distinguishing between her words and the original text through quotation, citation, and italics. Karen was able to draft the story’s beginning and rising actions. Hopefully next session she can complete the first draft and start working on revision. Although Karen and Amanda may not have another opportunity to work together, Amanda is looking forward to seeing how the final project turns out.

Pop Culture in the Classroom

The reading that resonated with me most this week was ““Dear Tupac, you speak to me”: Recruiting Hip Hop as Curriculum at a School for Pregnant and Parenting Teens” by Heidi L. Hallman. I think that this reading demonstrates that pop culture literacy is inappropriately undervalued in educational settings. In education classes, we read a lot about the difficulties of connecting with students and engaging them with the course material. In this article, Hallman’s examination of “out-of-school” literacies demonstrates that not only should elements of pop culture be incorporated into the classroom, but they can also serve as effective and creative modes of entry into the curriculum.  I was particularly interested in how being able to write about Hip Hop songs and artists inspired the pregnant and parenting teens to express their own feelings and stories through verse and prose; the songs that spoke to the students seemed to serve as better models for self-reflection than a form of traditional in-school literacy, such as a textbook or one of the novels in the educational literary canon.

The connection between Hip Hop and autobiographical expression also reminded me of an English class I took last semester on Jay-Z, which was called “Shawn Carter: Autobiography of an Autobiographer.”  This class marked my first experience in which out-of-school literacies, which I did not have, were valued over in-school literacies. Although I felt out of my element through much of the semester, I learned about the connection between Hip Hop and identity and developed a better understanding and appreciation for rap lyrics and artistry. I also witnessed the high level of engagement and participation that results from allowing students to employ their pop culture knowledge in a classroom setting. I found the class discussions to be both provocative and highly relevant; they seemed like more advanced and academic versions of conversations my friends and I were having. Learning about Hip Hop also gave me new tools for expressing my own identity and prompted me to conceptualize my  autobiography in a different way.

Although I grew tremendously as a writer and listener in the class on Jay-Z, it didn’t occur to me that high school students might also benefit from a course that employs Hip Hop music until I mentioned the class to one of the senior high school students in the classroom that I observe. He was so excited about the prospect of taking an entire course on his favorite rapper that he told me that he would apply to Vassar with the solely based on that class. It was exciting to see a student become passionate simply about potential course content. I think that my experience with the student, in addition to Hallman’s article, demonstrates that if educators crossed the line between in-school and out-of-school literacies and brought pop culture into the classroom, it would open up the curriculum and student involvement in new and exciting ways.

Crew: It’s Harder than it Looks

Today, Isabella and I tried to finalize our ideas from our literacy project. Isabella wants to focus on the energy and time that she devotes to crew. We found some pictures online of the U.S. Women Rowing Team to serve as examples and inspiration for the project. Here is a photo of the 2008 Olympic gold metal-winning team:

These women worked incredibly hard to be the best!

In addition to searching for photographs, we also found videos of the national team on YouTube, which we may be able to incorporate into our final project. For our digital story, Isabella wants to combine examples of workout schedules, maps of the team’s daily running route, and her teammates perspectives to demonstrate the commitment of being on a high school crew team. Before our next meeting, Isabella plans on talking to her coaches about copies of practice write-ups and team photos that we may be able to include in our story. Next time, I hope that we can create a narrative arc for the digital story, so that we know exactly what media and information we need to collect. I am still pushing to see some of Isabella’s writing or poetry in the story. I hope that once we finalize our plan, she will identify gaps in the digital story that can be filled with her own voice.

Project Update: Isabella and Amanda

Isabella and I were both surprised when we found out that we were paired together because we had met previously: I participated in the Vassar After School Tutoring (VAST) program during freshman and sophomore years and she was one of the students in my knitting clinic. It was exciting to have an established bond with the student that I am working with in this class and I look forward to learning even more about her.

Because Isabella and I already knew the basics about each other, we jumped right into project brainstorming. Isabella had some really creative ideas that involved her interests, such as making a presentation that combines her athletic pursuits, swimming, crew, and outdoor activities, with poetry. Isabella is also interested in American History, such as the Salem Witch Trials, and loves to babysit, so these are also potential project choices – maybe we will make a digital story that combines historical fiction with babysitting, which sounds like a stretch but could be challenging and really entertaining. Clearly, we need to narrow our focus and attempt to come up with some more concrete ideas.

I hope that in our next meeting, Isabella and I will work together to determine the nature of a project that will be engaging for the entire semester. I hope that, in our future meetings, I will get to see some of her writing because I think that her voice as a reader and writer will play a significant role in the trajectory of the our work together – maybe she can even create a little piece of writing to post on the blog!

Epistolary Bonds with Students

Harvey Daniels’s article on exchanging weekly letters with his students really resonated with me.  Although the concept of reading and writing letters to 50 – 100 students is daunting, I was able to imagine myself undertaking this task even before I had finished reading the article. As I work towards my teaching certification, I frequently encounter new concerns about engaging my future students, but it is not often that I read about a strategy that I immediately want to try. Because my educational background and funds of knowledge derive from a white upper-middle class upbringing and private schools, one of my primary concerns as a future teacher is that I will not be able to connect with students from a variety of different backgrounds. The idea of forging bounds through writing letters seems like a viable solution to this concern because I can connect with my students by demonstrating genuine and sustained interest in their lives rather than through superficial similarities that may not exist.

As put forth by Daniels, other positive outcomes of this student-teacher correspondence are it “allows the teacher to model good writing, to create a just-right text for each child to read, [and] to see and assess each student’s writing skills” (Daniels 128). I imagine myself as a teacher being a stickler for grammar, so I see these letters as an opportunity to demonstrate proper grammar and punctuation while not having to edit the students writing. I also appreciated Daniels’s advice to “write informally” and allow students to see crossed out and misspelled words. I think that allowing the student to see the teacher’s thought process makes the teacher seem more human and less like a knowledge dispenser.

The final aspect of Daniels’s article that I appreciated was the strategies for giving students both positive and critical feedback within the letters. He makes the point that when students receive feedback in this private manner, “it is less likely the kid will react defensively or feel a need to act defiant in front of peers” (Daniels 140).  This also allows the student to reflect on his or her behavior and devise a strategy for improvement. In this way, the teacher gives a student agency over his or her classroom conduct; an individual’s behavior can consequently improve as a result of his or her own choices, not the reprimands of the teacher. I realize that implementing this program on a large scale may overwhelm teachers, but I definitely want to try it when I teach because I think that the rewarding relationships that emerge from these letters far exceeds the effort.

Isabella’s Biography

My name is Isabella. I was born in Poughkeepsie, New York almost 15 years ago. I have two brothers, but a couple of years ago my three cousins lived with my family too – we always had people to play with. I am a freshman at Poughkeepsie High School and my main focuses are academics and sports. My favorites subjects in school are English and History and I hope to take a journalism and psychology class before I graduate from high school. Another of my favorite classes is art because I love sketching. Crew and swimming are the most important things I do everyday. I am competitive and driven in athletics and I don’t like to lose. When I’m not in school, I like to read and write and I hope to be a journalist, or  if that doesn’t work out, to be able to join the Marines.

Bio: Amanda

Photo of Amanda Zeligs
I like to laugh…

My name is Amanda. I was born on the central coast of California 21 years ago and now attend college in New York. I am a junior English major and am pursuing my secondary teaching certification. About my interests: I feel like my primary interest is academics, but in the rare moments when I am not busy with that, I like to dance and people watch. I also love to laugh, especially with friends, and when I really need to calm down and take time for myself, I paint my nails. I love my parents and try to at least text them everyday. I do not like candy that contains nuts. I consider that I have many responsibilities, but, at this moment, none greater than this: to maintain my sense of integrity and graduate from college.

Look! I made a digital sonnet: